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[ClarissaMach]

Could somebody tell me if everything is ok in the text below?

Dear partner,

The General Training Schedule for the period right after the go-live date in PSPL follows below.

For better results, we inform you that, once the module by which the study will be initiated is chosen, the courses must be carried through in the sequence indicated by the Schedule of each module.

Do not forget that the course PRE204 must be done before all the others, in case you have not done it yet.

To make things easier, we highlighted the courses that are prerrequisites for each module.
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[CP]

It's a little hard to put just the right spin on this without a little more context -- to whom is it written, for what? But without further information, I would edit the letter to read thus:

Dear Partner,

The General Training Schedule for the period following the go-live date in PSPL is below.

Once a study module is chosen, the courses must be taken in the sequence indicated in the schedule for that module.

In case you have not yet taken course PRE204, please remember that it must be completed before all the others.

For your convenience, we have highlighted the prerequisite courses for each module.

Yours truly,

XXX
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