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Chan-Seung Lee



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PostPosted: Fri Sep 01, 2006 5:48 am    Post subject: not only.. Reply with quote

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Not only was the Erie Canal an engineering triumph; it quickly proved a financial success as well.


Is the above example correct? I think 'Not only was the Erie Canal an engineering triumph, but it quickly proved a financial success as well.' is more correct than the above example. But I'm not sure. Can you teach me?

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asterix



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PostPosted: Fri Sep 01, 2006 9:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is a pretty old construction that goes back at least to the Latin:
non solum....sed etiam = not only... but also.
Nowadays it is OK, apparently, to write it as in your example, with the semi-colon.
However, I think it is better English to include the but.
As well means the same thing as also, so that is OK.
I also think you need to include to be
Not only was the Erie Canal an engineering triumph, but it quickly proved to be a financial success as well.

Not only was the Erie Canal an engineering triumph, but also it quickly proved to be a financial success.

Not only was the Erie Canal an engineering triumph, but it quickly proved to be a financial success also.
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