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[Junkomama]

Ｈｅｌｌｏ，　ｔｅａｃｈｅｒｓ．

Expecting too much of your children often causes a bad result. They might lose their way in life.
→Expecting too much of your children often have/ give/ make/produce a bad effect. They might miss their way in life.

Is the paraphrasing acceptable?

Thank you in advance!
Junkomama

[Anuradha Chepur]

Expecting too much of your children often has a bad effect. They might miss their way in life.

[Junkomama]

Thank you so much for your answer, Anuradha-san!!

Regards,
Junkomama