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Chan-Seung Lee



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PostPosted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 8:22 am    Post subject: both Reply with quote

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1.Women are generally more inclined than men to express positive opinions, both about the things they like and the things they don't like.
2.Women are generally more inclined than men to express positive opinions both about the things they like and the things they don't like.
3.Women are generally more inclined than men to express positive opinions about the things they like and the things they don't like.



I saw #1 in a book. I made up #2 by deleting the comma and #3 by deleting the comma and the word 'both'.
I wonder if #2 and #3 can be the same meaning as #1. And if they are wrong, can you tell me why?

Thanks.
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Anuradha Chepur



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PostPosted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 11:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You need a comma, since they are two sentences joined by a conjunction, 'both.' The sentence is alright with 'about', but you still need a comma before it, as it is a long sentence. Both is more suitable than about, though.
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Mary W. Ng



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PostPosted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 4:27 pm    Post subject: Re: both Reply with quote

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1.Women are generally more inclined than men to express positive opinions, both about the things they like and the things they don't like.

Correlative conjunctions like both ... and ... join words or phrases that are of the same grammatical form. The sentence should read: "Women are generally more inclined than men to express positive opinions, both about the things they like and about the things they don't like."

With the comma, the phrase introduced by both is non-defining.

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2.Women are generally more inclined than men to express positive opinions both about the things they like and the things they don't like.

Again the sentence should read: "Women are generally more inclined than men to express positive opinions both about the things they like and about the things they don't like."

Without the comma, the phrase introduced by both becomes defining.

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3.Women are generally more inclined than men to express positive opinions about the things they like and the things they don't like.

This sentence is fine.
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Anuradha Chepur



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PostPosted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 8:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The general understanding is that we put a comma depending on whether the clause is defining or non-defining. Labelling a clause as defining or non defining depending on whether we have chosen to put a comma or not is new to me.
Interesting, anyway.
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lotus



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PostPosted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 10:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hi,

Restrictive (defining) and non-restrictive (non-defining) clauses are determined by the existence of a comma.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/clauses.htm#restrictive

When a comma is there, it's non-restrictive (not essential to the meaning of the sentence). When a comma's not there, it's restrictive (essential to the meaning of the sentence).
http://www.english.uiuc.edu/cws/wworkshop/writer_resources/grammar_handbook/restrictive_non_clauses.htm#nonrestrictive

The existence of the punctuation determines the nature of the clause. The writer punctuates depending on his/her intent. Most of the time, the wording of the clause can indicate whether it's restrictive or non-restrictive. Still, proper punctuation must be used to avoid confusion.
http://www.ucalgary.ca/UofC/eduweb/grammar/course/punctuation/3_4c.htm

Sometimes, the clause can be ambiguous and we have to use the proper punctuation to indicate our meaning.
http://www.bartleby.com/68/32/5132.html

Sometimes, we use "that" or "which" to help indicate whether the clause is restrictive or non-restrictive (although I don't recommend it, because the relative pronoun "that" has been over-used and the distinction has lost its meaning).
http://www.bartleby.com/68/91/5991.html

Since we can't read the writer's mind, the writer must use the proper punctuation to indicate whether a clause is essential or not essential to the meaning of the sentence. Barring obvious context, the reader can only interpret the writer's intent through the existence (or non-existence) of the punctuation.

#3 does not need punctuation. "About..." is a prepositional phrase modifying "opinions" and does not need a comma to set it off.


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Anuradha Chepur



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PostPosted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 11:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The links provided only tell us to set off a non-restrictive clause with a comma.
In any case, the clause introduced by both in the OP is non-essential to the main clause. It can be removed from the sentence and the main clause would make sense on its own. So we need a comma there. The clause introduced by both, is referred to by some as a 'trailing dependent clause' that enhances the meaning of the sentence. They recommend setting it off with a comma so it doesn't get lost in the sentence, specially if it's a longish sentence. The sentence is too long to say it without a pause.
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