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[Allouie]

Does the following sentetence sound natural?

- In order to improve the tragic situation of HIV, all countries on the earth need to {PUT MORE ENERGY INTO} this issue as their own problems.

Thank you.
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YUKIKO

[Mister Micawber]

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Yes, it sounds fine, with another change:

In order to improve the tragic situation of HIV, all countries on the earth need to PUT MORE ENERGY INTO this issue as their own problem.
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Canadian-American who teaches English for a living at Mr Micawber's

[Allouie]

Thank you, Mister Micawber!
Sorry that I didn't reply soon.
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YUKIKO