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[stevenukd]

Dear Teachers,

- I don't want to choose the job "medical representative" because I have some limits in persuading other people, espacially using some of my professional competences to obtain targets that the company give to me.

- In the field of business, negotiating and persuading my partners to buy the products is still the skill that I'm trying to improve.

- Are these ok to write?

Thanks a million

Stevenukd

[bud]

Steven, I'm not sure that I understand what you meant. Are the following rewrites any help to you?

I don't want to choose the job "medical representative" because I have some limitations in persuading other people. I especially need to improve my professional skills to achieve the goals that the company gives me.

In the field of business, I still need to improve my skill in negotiating with and persuading my customers to buy the products.