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[Junkomama]

Is it acceptable to change 1 to 2 or 3?
A
1.the terrible incidents that occurred in succession
2.the successively occurred terrible incidents
3.the successive terrible incidents

B
1.the terrible incidents that occurred in succession recently
2.the recent successively occurred terrible incidents
3.the recent successive terrible incidents

Thank you in advance!
Junkomama

[2006]

For both A and B, #3 is okay but I don't like #2.

[Junkomama]

Thanks a lot for your answer, 2006-san!!

Regards,
Junkomama