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ClarissaMach
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 Posted: Tue Sep 05, 2006 4:37 am Post subject: Doubt about commas |
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The commas in the text below are been used in a right way?
This work, which includes a brief description of both academic and industrial scenarios of the State of Rio de Janeiro, has the objective to create and to describe a mechanism focusing the interaction between an academic research group and polymer industries towards innovation in the field of Bone Bioengineering.
By the way, I guess it should be "the objective of creating and describing"; isn't it?
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CP
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Commas are right.
Yes, I would use the gerunds instead of the infinitives.
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