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BMO
Joined: 19 Feb 2004 Posts: 705
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Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2006 9:03 pm Post subject: Big car, small car |
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1. There are two cars. One is bigger. The other is smaller.
Is there anything wrong with this sentence? I think grammatically it is not, but can I change it to:
2. There are two cars, one is bigger than the other.
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abud
Joined: 06 Jan 2006 Posts: 11
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Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2006 12:25 am Post subject: nice |
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i saw ur sentences...it is very great ...
anyway this is my first replay in this fourm
thank u |
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LucentShade
Joined: 30 Dec 2003 Posts: 542 Location: Nebraska, USA
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Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2006 9:41 am Post subject: |
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The only thing I would change in sentence two is puntuation: "There are two cars; one is bigger than the other." |
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asterix
Joined: 26 Jan 2003 Posts: 1654
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Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2006 2:16 pm Post subject: |
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You could say,... one is big, the other is smaller |
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advoca
Joined: 09 Oct 2003 Posts: 422 Location: Beijing
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Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2006 3:20 pm Post subject: |
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What language is Abud writing in? Seems strange to me. |
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Lorikeet

Joined: 08 Oct 2005 Posts: 1877 Location: San Francisco
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Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2006 2:08 am Post subject: |
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advoca wrote: |
What language is Abud writing in? Seems strange to me. |
abud wrote: |
i saw ur sentences...it is very great ...
anyway this is my first replay in this fourm
thank u
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I saw your sentences. They are very great.
Anyway, this is my first reply in this forum.
Thank you. |
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BMO
Joined: 19 Feb 2004 Posts: 705
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Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2006 7:57 am Post subject: |
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asterix wrote: |
You could say,... one is big, the other is smaller |
Yes. I keep thinking, how could the original sentence say one is bigger, and one is smaller, when the first car has no car to compare with. Thanks. You corrected the situation.
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ErwinR
Joined: 29 Dec 2005 Posts: 57 Location: Eindhoven, The Netherlands
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Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 8:42 pm Post subject: |
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But with this last suggestion you say that one car is big. They could be both small and still there could be one bigger than the other. I would use LucentShade's sentence (although I think I would rephrase the whole sentence, but that's not what you're asking). |
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BMO
Joined: 19 Feb 2004 Posts: 705
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 9:48 am Post subject: |
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ErwinR wrote: |
But with this last suggestion you say that one car is big. They could be both small and still there could be one bigger than the other. I would use LucentShade's sentence (although I think I would rephrase the whole sentence, but that's not what you're asking). |
Absolutely, it really did not say one is a big car. Thanks. |
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advoca
Joined: 09 Oct 2003 Posts: 422 Location: Beijing
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 11:53 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks, Lorikeet, for the translation of Abud's message.
I hope he will use English for future posts. |
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ebb

Joined: 12 Jan 2006 Posts: 87 Location: USA
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Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2006 4:55 pm Post subject: |
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"One car's bigger than the other." OR
"One car's smaller than the other."
These would be more typical expressions in colloquial speech. "There are" or "there is" = usually excess fat.
So, there's usually a better way to write it. errrrrr... I mean "A better way usually exists" .... errrrrrrr "A better way is usually available" .... aww, to hell with it. _________________ "This is insolence up with which I will not put." Winston Churchill, upon reading a newspaper�s criticism of his having ended a sentence with a preposition.
"You can get more with a kind word and a gun, than with just a kind word." Al Capone. |
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