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BMO



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PostPosted: Thu Jan 05, 2006 9:03 pm    Post subject: Big car, small car Reply with quote

1. There are two cars. One is bigger. The other is smaller.

Is there anything wrong with this sentence? I think grammatically it is not, but can I change it to:

2. There are two cars, one is bigger than the other.

Thanks.
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abud



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PostPosted: Fri Jan 06, 2006 12:25 am    Post subject: nice Reply with quote

i saw ur sentences...it is very great ...
anyway this is my first replay in this fourm
thank u
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LucentShade



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PostPosted: Fri Jan 06, 2006 9:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The only thing I would change in sentence two is puntuation: "There are two cars; one is bigger than the other."
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asterix



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PostPosted: Fri Jan 06, 2006 2:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You could say,... one is big, the other is smaller
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advoca



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PostPosted: Fri Jan 06, 2006 3:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

What language is Abud writing in? Seems strange to me.
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Lorikeet



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PostPosted: Sat Jan 07, 2006 2:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

advoca wrote:
What language is Abud writing in? Seems strange to me.


abud wrote:

i saw ur sentences...it is very great ...
anyway this is my first replay in this fourm
thank u


I saw your sentences. They are very great.
Anyway, this is my first reply in this forum.
Thank you.
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BMO



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PostPosted: Sat Jan 07, 2006 7:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

asterix wrote:
You could say,... one is big, the other is smaller


Yes. I keep thinking, how could the original sentence say one is bigger, and one is smaller, when the first car has no car to compare with. Thanks. You corrected the situation.

bmo
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ErwinR



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PostPosted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 8:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

But with this last suggestion you say that one car is big. They could be both small and still there could be one bigger than the other. I would use LucentShade's sentence (although I think I would rephrase the whole sentence, but that's not what you're asking).
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BMO



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PostPosted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 9:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

ErwinR wrote:
But with this last suggestion you say that one car is big. They could be both small and still there could be one bigger than the other. I would use LucentShade's sentence (although I think I would rephrase the whole sentence, but that's not what you're asking).


Absolutely, it really did not say one is a big car. Thanks.
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advoca



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PostPosted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 11:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks, Lorikeet, for the translation of Abud's message.

I hope he will use English for future posts.
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ebb



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PostPosted: Fri Jan 13, 2006 4:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

"One car's bigger than the other." OR

"One car's smaller than the other."

These would be more typical expressions in colloquial speech. "There are" or "there is" = usually excess fat.

So, there's usually a better way to write it. Laughing Laughing Laughing errrrrr... I mean "A better way usually exists" .... errrrrrrr "A better way is usually available" .... aww, to hell with it.
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