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kisliu
Joined: 21 Mar 2006 Posts: 11
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Posted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 5:25 pm Post subject: can s.o help me to make the sentense structure more clear? p |
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Abuse means Physical, sexual, emotional or verbal maltreatment to other person. Even though we live in a civilized society, I still cannot believe but happen,and the domestic abuse is the most common one in the society. Despite my own opinion, home should be the safest, warm and comfortable place for a family to live in, but fatally many abuses are happen at home.
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juliesince78
Joined: 27 Apr 2006 Posts: 6 Location: Maryland
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Posted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 8:39 pm Post subject: |
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| Abuse is maltreatment of another person. It can be physical, sexual, emotional, or verbal. Even though we live in a civilized society, I still cannot believe this happens and that domestic abuse is the most common. In my opinion, home should be the safest, warmest, and most comfortable place where a family can be, but unfortunately most abuse happens in the home. |
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pinenut
Joined: 16 Feb 2006 Posts: 165 Location: Illinois, U.S.A.
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Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 9:27 am Post subject: |
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| juliesince78 wrote: |
| Abuse is maltreatment of another person. It can be physical, sexual, emotional, or verbal. Even though we live in a civilized society, I still cannot believe this happens and that domestic abuse is the most common. In my opinion, home should be the safest, warmest, and most comfortable place where a family can be, but unfortunately most abuse happens in the home. |
juliesince78,
Would you mind if I make a few changes to yours?
Even though we live in a civilized society, I cannot believe this still happens and that most abuse happens in homes. In my opinion, home should be the safest, warmest, and most comfortable place where a family can. |
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juliesince78
Joined: 27 Apr 2006 Posts: 6 Location: Maryland
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Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 9:30 am Post subject: |
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| I would go with something like that too but I was trying to keep it as close to what the op had written, just more coherent. |
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Mister Micawber

Joined: 23 Mar 2006 Posts: 774 Location: Yokohama
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Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 6:48 pm Post subject: |
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My turn:
Abuse means physical, sexual, emotional or verbal maltreatment of another person. Because we live in a civilized society, I still cannot believe such abuse happens, yet domestic abuse is the most common form of this behaviour. In my opinion, home should be the safest, warmest and most comfortable place for a family, but tragically, most abuse happens at home.
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kisliu
Joined: 21 Mar 2006 Posts: 11
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Posted: Mon May 01, 2006 6:36 pm Post subject: |
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